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clear-skied smile, beguiling
with windy teeth, approaches
the moistened flesh
of Autumn's amber neck
with sun-full cunning

undaunted, she
continues to sway her leafy curves
unrivaled siren, golden-veiled
evades the nippy bite
prolongs the annual courting,
seducing the marauder, whilst
calmly and wisely delegating
so when the final dance arrives
and she gives in to winter's
breach unstoppable,
all will be primed
for her hibernal slumber;

once bitten twice ready.


  

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:iconyouinventedme:
strong poem, and I love the image.
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*halcyonshores Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am very grateful for your kind words, Shane.
Humble thanks.
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~Piscesandthediamonds Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the whole analogy is gentle and beautiful, but my goodness that exit is powerful :heart:
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*halcyonshores Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Humblest thanks Natalie! :love:
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:iconkissthesunrise:
What a lovely combination of words and a colorful dreamy image. :heart:
"once bitten twice ready."
and autumn succumbs divested of its raiment.
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*halcyonshores Nov 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your own words and images are always glowing with the spontaneity,
beautiful mischief and fresh beauty that is you. Thank you :sun:
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:iconkissthesunrise:
d'aww.. that's so sweet - you've seriously made me blush.
You must be peeking in my windows to know I'm so mischievous! ;p
The spontaneity comes from ?? :hug: :heart:

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*halcyonshores Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No peeking, honest ;p
I suppose I simply feel it - it takes one to know one ;)
As for the spontaneity, I meant that you are a pure and
genuine person and it shows in your comments and works.

And blushing ROCKS!! :glomp:
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:iconkissthesunrise:
Oh my goodness!! :blush: Thank you so much. I love to read your comments and replies. They're full of grace and beauty :heart:
I agree, it takes one to know one. I've had this 'feeling' that you know a great deal about how to live spontaneously and passionately.. ;p
Yes honestly I do blush, it gets embarrassing sometimes and I can't hide it either, not with my coloring. lol !!
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*halcyonshores Dec 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You are a purest and natural delight.

I know it's been a while but I so had to reply to this one.
Your sunny personality is deliciously contagious.

Wishing you and yours a lovely and happy holiday season.

:love: :heart:
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